SHIFT HAPPENS
So for our script we have a decition to make, whether Jay to be Paulie's friend or rival.
In the script i'll show you where the rift will occur
Script idea outline
Paulie (Main character) buys a new car. Then montage of him modifying it. When he is done show that he is happy. Then he is on the way to the car meet/race spot. On the way there is one of those guys that wash the car window and Paulie gets mad since he just washed the car, so he decides to fight the guy. Once he gets to the car meet/ race spot, he finds Jay this cocky guy with a 1999 Porche Boxter. When Paulie parks Jay comes up to him asking what's under da hood. Then we say some goofy names for the car pats instead of the actual names. Then they get ready to race, and Paulie stalls his car like a dan, but it's not over yet because the new super duper cool big fat snail modifications he put give him just the speed he needs to win. But then the cops pull up, (the cop is gonna be a guy however they will be using a lady cop outfit, and Paulie says” hello sir?!) and he gets arrested.
Script Outline Idea condensed:
Credits: 15 sec
Paulie (Main character) buys new car performance parts from the black market (he talks to a car part dealer whose name is Mr. Clutch) ( 20 sec).Paulie closing the hood of the car showing that he has installed the part ( 5 sec). Then he is on the way to the car meet/race spot ( 10 sec) . Once he gets to the car meet/ race spot, he finds Jay this cocky guy with a 1999 Porche Boxter. When Paulie parks Jay comes up to him asking what's under da hood (15 sec). Then we say some goofy names for the car pats instead of the actual names (20 sec). Then they get ready to race, and Paulie stalls his car and looking dumb(15 sec).
Script 1 (Jay as rival)
BACK ALLEY – NIGHT
Paulie leans casually against his car, arms crossed. He looks calm, like he’s done this before. MR. CLUTCH walks up holding a case.
PAULIE
MR. Clutch?
MR. CLUTCH
Depends, whos asking
PAULIE
Its paul. You got the thing?
MR. CLUTCH
-Mr. Clutch opens the case carefully. Inside is a rare looking performance part.
Original and imported, took me six months to track it down.
Paulie nods, impressed.
PAULIE
This thing better wake the car up.
MR. CLUTCH
-walks away
Paulie smiles.
Duration about 20 seconds.
PAULIE’S DRIVEWAY – NIGHT
Paulie tightens the last bolt and closes the hood.
PAULIE
Duration about 5 seconds.
STREET – NIGHT
Paulie drives toward the car meet.
Duration about 10 seconds.
CAR MEET – NIGHT
Paulie pulls in smoothly.Jay, leaning on his Car, watches closely before walking over.
JAY
Nice build.
So what are you running?
Paulie steps out calmly.
PAULIE
Enough.
Jay laughs.
JAY
Come on. What’s under the hood?
Paulie smirks.
Duration about 15 seconds.
Paulie leans against his car like a pro.
PAULIE
Custom turbo encubobulator.
Forged mega pistons.
And a fat snail.
Jay stares.
JAY
how.
PAULIE
i got my ways
JAY
Whatever, man. Hope it’s faster than your mouth.
PAULIE
*smirks
Slower then your moms
Jay: Save it for the race
Duration about 20 seconds.
CAR MEET – NIGHT
Paulie and Jay get into their cars. Someone off screen starts counting.
GUY THAT COUNTS RACE DOWN
Three… two… one…
Paulie launches.
The car STALLS instantly.
Dead silence.
Paulie grips the wheel, annoyed, not panicked.
PAULIE
shit shit sh
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Script 2 (Jay as frined)
BACK ALLEY – NIGHT
Paulie leans casually against his car, arms crossed. He looks calm, like he’s done this before. MR. CLUTCH walks up holding a case.
PAULIE
MR. Clutch?
MR. CLUTCH?
Depends, whos asking
PAULIE
Its paul. You got the thing?
MR. CLUTCH
-Mr. Clutch opens the case carefully. Inside is a rare looking performance part.
Original and imported, took me six months to track it down.
Paulie nods, impressed.
PAULIE
This thing better wake the car up.
MR. CLUTCH
-walks away
Paulie smiles.
Duration about 20 seconds.
PAULIE’S DRIVEWAY – NIGHT
Paulie tightens the last bolt and closes the hood.
PAULIE gets a call from Jay
Jay (through phone): Yo man race about to start where are you
Paulie: Chill out i'm on my way.
Duration about 15 seconds.
STREET – NIGHT
Paulie drives toward the car meet.
Duration about 10 seconds.
CAR MEET – NIGHT
Paulie pulls in smoothly.Jay, leaning on his Car, watches closely before walking over.
JAY
*daps up
Always late huh.
PAULIE
I was busy tuning the new part
Jay
Oh yeah?
Paulie smirks.
Duration about 15 seconds.
Paulie opens his hood.
PAULIE
Custom turbo encubobulator.
Forged mega pistons.
And a fat snail.
Jay stares.
JAY
how.
PAULIE
i got my ways
JAY
Whatever, man. Hope it’s faster than your mouth.
PAULIE
*smirks
Duration about 20 seconds.
RACE ORGANIZER
Alright boys line em up!!!
The cars car line up and are ready to race
PAULIE
So you ready to lose!?
(spits)
JAY
Skirks, well see.
RACE ORGANIZER
3, 2, 1, go!
Paulie stalls his car
PAULIE
Shit, shit, sh-
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